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Part 1.
ひろとりかんじーさん ラブ パート1 「Hirotori Kanji’s Love:Part 1」  -continued-









                    The train came, its large metallic body roared deafeningly through the station. Keiro and Hirotori grabbed bentos to eat inside the train, even though the train has a dining car. “Keiro-kun, you know there’s a dining car in the train.” Hirotori said with an undertone. “I know, but it cost too much. 830 for a burger meal!?” Keiro protested. “I’d rather eat a box of bento!” Hirotori sighed, “Okay then, Keiro, if that’s what you want.” They sat I their assigned seats and waited for the train to leave the station.

The train hissed as it raced through the tracks. The train shook slightly as it passed through bumps and little microscopic crevasses in the rails hit the large metallic wheels that followed the seemingly endless lines of iron and other metallic mineral. Hirotori looked outside, she wanted to gasp at the beautiful scenery, but she couldn’t cause her sickness is suppressing her feelings, getting worse month by month.  “Huh, what’s wrong, Hirotori-chan?” Keiro asked. “Uh, nothing, nothing.” Hirotori snaps out of her fantasy. “Are you sure?” Keiro sounded worried. “Yeah, I’m fine.” Hirotori smirked.

“Are you hungry?” Keiro asked. “No, no, after that plate of food my mom gave me this morning, I don’t know if I could eat for another month!” Hirotori replied. Hirotori’s stomach growled. “Are you sure?”  Keiro grinned slyly. Keiro passed him, her bento, Hirotori grabbed it as fast as she could, took out her chopsticks and attacked her bento like there’s no tomorrow. “Wow, really hungry I guessed.” Keiro laughed nervously.

“Hehehe, sorry.” Hirotori muffled with a piece of tuna hanging in her mouth. Keiro laughed hysterically as he saw Hirotori’s funny acquisition. The train halted violently. “Aaah!” Both of them yelled. The violent halt cause Keiro to topple on Hirotori. “Aah.” Keiro blushed intensely as he was on top of Hirotori, Hirotori also felt the same, but her face was red as paint. Keiro got off as fast as he could. Hirotori got up and the train continued its smooth expedition “We’re sorry for the inconvenience, it will never happen again, thank you for riding the Train.” The conductor said over the intercom.. Time passed as the train roared and skipped stops, ran across cities, towns, and prefectures. “We’re nearing, Tokyo. Please wait a few minutes.” The conductor said on the PA system.  “Ah, we’re finally here.” Keiro said. Hirotori looked out the windows as she gazed into the Tokyo scene. “Aaah!” Hirotori gasped as the train passed into lights and signs that seemed endless. The train slowly stopped. Hirotori and Keiro walked to the train doors. Doors hiss and it released pressure inside and out.























                            

to be continued....継続される....
Yeah, part 4 LOL. This is a long Story. :D....


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Awesome. You're a great writer. ^^